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The drums are slightly too loud but great track overall :)

Literally the next Marauda :D
Allthough i don't really like the part from 1:00 to 1:20, it's looses it's energy :/

SO UNDERRATED, THIS IS BRUTAL
Love that pan snare
btw it would sound even cooler if you added some more mashine guns basses :)

Yoink

Interesting

Lmao

The snare sound have some more layers (like 2 more, one panned to left and the other one to right) to sound a bit better on headphones, the drums and the bass are really groovy and sound really cool. Thr melody beginning at 0:40 sounds cool, but could use some variations to make a 4 or 8 bar loop, would make it more interresting. Also you could add a vibrato or smth. to make it sound more interesting. The part at 2:00 is a bit empty, add percussions or some parts but not the whole drum loop. The part at 2:45 when you add cymbals somehow the initial groove from the beginning is lost, try to make it less on the grid or quieter and also the bass&kick are too low, which gave that funky feel. But ovarall great mix and really funky :D

Feynmar responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I think I agree with everything. The drums are indeed thin and could use layering. The carousel synth is a bit basic indeed. I agree the transition at 2:00 is very light. I tried a bit adding more stuff, but couldn't get it to sound right, so left it simple (probably too simple.) I've just updated the part with the cymbals, so the bassline follows the main groove, as it was easy to change.

The main growl should have some more groove, add something like glich effects to it or some cool automation, now it just sounds plain and the same through the entire drop, but otherwise it sounds very cool. (btw. this sounds more like deadlocked than toe lol) :)

Cool, but the drums are too loud :/

Kamiakiro responds:

yeah I agree

fixed it

Although i don't really listen to downtempo, this sounds really cool, like in outerspace or in a cave :)

Midnights-Ocean responds:

Thanks! : )

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